Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
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Hi Tilly, first of all, well done for putting together your first documentary! Your voice is really clear and easy to understand. I like how you also did some of your own research! Hopefully next week the videos work better and we can add more in.
ReplyDeleteHi Tilly! I really like your work. Also your voice is very clear. I really like your work! :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent work Tilly! I like how you have music and videos and images in your documentary. You speak very clearly too.
ReplyDeleteHi there Tilly
ReplyDeleteWhat a sensational job you have done making this elephant documentary. Your voice was really clear and I love how you included music and images with a multitude of interesting facts. I love elephants and I think it is so devastating how so many have been killed by hunters. I am amazed how many things they use their trunks for, isn't it great that hey can smell danger to protect themselves? Brilliant effort!