Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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Hi Tilly,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have adjusted your the original slide and added your work in between. Good idea. I feel though that you haven't really extended yourself by only choosing 3 fruits. I would like to see some high quality work and that means you may need to spend a bit more time on the task. It would also be a good idea to use google sheets to make your graph.
Hello Tilly it is Eloise. I really like this post the way that you made the graph yourself(I had to use google sheets). I had to do the same task to do (well we are both in korimako) maybe next time you could put in a title. Wish I could see you. From Eloise
ReplyDeleteThank for the feedback Eloise and Mr Sutherland.
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