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Thursday, April 4, 2019

This is mine and eloises.eloises Is The first and mines the second (PS) DONT TURN THE PAGE

3 comments:

  1. Hi Tilly,
    I liked the way you drew it yourself. Did you think about what you wanted you machine to look like? Maybe you could give it a better fitting title.

    Rosara

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  2. i like it how it is...but ill think bout itšŸ˜œ

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  3. Hi Tilly :) I like the way you drew your picture. When I read you post I liked all the creations you made up. Next time you could put more colour! Thank you.

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