Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 4, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Tilly,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you drew it yourself. Did you think about what you wanted you machine to look like? Maybe you could give it a better fitting title.
Rosara
i like it how it is...but ill think bout itš
ReplyDeleteHi Tilly :) I like the way you drew your picture. When I read you post I liked all the creations you made up. Next time you could put more colour! Thank you.
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